we have been learning to make descriptive writing. how was your holiday

we have been learning to make descriptive writing. how was your holiday

In term 3 we made a story about a whisper I named it “Pain” because that is one word that described it
I am asleep, I wake up, I hear someone I need to pee, I can’t move, there is a flesh demon on my lap. I wake up from sleep paralysis and I see my cat on my lap. I have to move him because he is on my lap and I need to pee. I walk to the bathroom then I see a demon. I can’t move my pants. I run faster than I have ever run. I have successfully reached outside and I see Lucas. I asked him “what are you doing here?” then he says “I don’t-” then he just explodes and turns into a demon and fully explodes my house and I get knocked out because of the explosion.
I heard a whisper that said “wake up wake up” then it screamed “WAKE UP” sa1 my eyes opened. “YES YES HE’S AWAKE” my eyes are closing again I couldn’t see because it was to blurry I wake up in a orphanage I decide to jump out of the orphanage its only one story long I jump there is a portal that forms and I get teleported into A massive mall that feels like It goes for eternity and for some reason I get fully healed I start nervously walking around I feel like i’m being watched I hear whispers and foot steps every shop is stocked up with objects and food. I’m feeling hungry so I eat some blueberry muffins and a sausage roll. I’m pretty full now so I head on with finding the exit. My legs are really tired. I notice one of the cars that is for sale and the key is right on the floor. I pick it up and unlock the car. I start on the engine and I’m off. But I’m crashing into a lot of objects along the way. Right after I’m having fun since what feels like an eternity the lights cut.
I turn on the car lights and drive a little bit slower because I don’t want to crash. The car randomly breaks down. So I get out of the car and start walking around suddenly a big CRASH! A big black pitch black 6.7 humanoid figure with a long neck falls from the roof and SCREAMS and starts chasing me. I’m thinking “WHAT THE HECK!” and I start running and running I see a rope and pull it and the big black pitch black 6.7 humanoid figure with a long neck falls over and dies as i’m walking down the mall with my heart racing thinking how am I going to get out of here. I see a light coming from the ceiling. I run over and look up and I see a silhouette of someone. I yell “HELP ME PLEASE” a ladder falls down and I climb up. I’m in my bed. I realise it was all a dream.
What would you do if you were stuck in a dream.
Smashing rocks on the beach with my dad. I loved doing it because we would go to the cafe I think? We would walk down to our special spot on the beach that looked like a table made out of rocks and we would grab smaller rocks and smash them to sand. Next memory was on my old wooden push bike because it was fun and I liked go down the little hill on the field and ride down the hill.
Pressure is a game in Roblox that I play. It is a horror game and it has a lot of monsters the first monster I will talk about is angler.
The first variant is normal the lights flicker then wait for the second sound so the first sound is a far scream and second sound is close scream.
The second angler is blitz the same as normal but just faster it also flickers the lights twice it also gives you 2 seconds to react, and all the variants sound different.
The third is froger it bounces from one side of the room to the other so be aware of that.
Then last is green smoke it moves really slow so that will catch you off guard.
Next is kinda like angler but its different it also is not classified as a angler in the game this one is the hardest and most annoying hardest its The Pandemonium if you get seen in the locker you will have to do a mini game were you have to keep your mouse pointer in the circle or you die.
Next entity on the list is glubby if you see a purple circle in the locker dont go in because if you don’t have a friend to help you out then you will die but just don’t get into a locker with the purple circles.
Good people he is basically a fake door to find the fake door go up to it but not to close that you open the door then listen if there is breathing then don’t go in. and do with all doors. if the door number sparks its FAKE.
Next is eye infestation it will make your camera look at him try to force your camera away and don’t flash beacon it because it will get angry.
Squiddles the squid don’t look at him or shine a light at him he will get angry and attack you he can also come after angler comes and breaks the lights.
He is a big beetle type thing if you get seen HIDE. When you meet The Searchlight you need to do the generators its like a timing mini game. If he is coming then go down and duck under the boxes.
The Ridge its one of the last things you will see in the ridge. Almost every room has a angler and to make it harder The Pandemonium will always spawn in the ridge.
It is a big robot thing that walks if it stands on you you die. Just to make it harder there is 3 SEARCHLIGHTS! AND YOU HAVE TO DO MORE GENERATORS.
Wall dwellers. If you hear foot steps that is not yours then look behind you FAST.
Man from the mindscape. He just jumpscares you but he doesn’t hurt you.
Synx is basically like the same as Man from the mindscape.
Turrets. They shoot at you if you are in there line of sight. If you flick a lever then the turrets go down
p.AI.n.t.e.r. He is a computer. But he controls the turrets.
Sebastian Solice or The Sabatior or The Ferryman. He is the shopkeeper and if you die you will meet him and he gives you a document of the Monster that you died to.
Last week we did west a math with Oliver, Austin, Sam, me, Tara, Meia, Sophie and Isla. My team was Oliver Sam, me and Isla. it was a long drive. Sams mum drove us there. It had very hard questions. 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this is my term 2 reflection ok
what have you enjoyed this year
On Tuesday we did cross country but why? It’s so poopy bum bum I would rather get 500 steps wep for the week then do cross country. Mrs Lang is so cool because she game me two dollars yay I got two sausages you are the best teacher Mrs Lang. Cross country is bad because you had to run in COW POOP. I almost slipped in the cow poop. Two days later the little kids do cross country YAY! I stood with Oliver, Austin, Luke and Caleb. I cheered loud so they could all hear me they also got a free sausage witch is not fair we had to run in COW POOP for a free sausage. Why do we have to do cross countr
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So basically it was the school holidays. It was my Dad’s birthday and my brother Theo’s birthday. I was really bored throughout the holidays. Oh and I went to Christchurch “Sad birthday to you, sad birthday to you! Sad birthday dear Theeeooo sad birthday to you!” I say as we eat his cake but before that we went to strawbərry fare.
My meal was eggs on toast with bacon, my Dad had BAKED BEANS!!! My Mum had uhh I forgot, Otto had something? I don’t know, and I forgot Theos meal as well, then we had cake. Also it was my Dads birthday a couple days before that.
Me and my cousins and brothers went to the playground and played tag. The other kids at the playground were jealous of us and they started playing tag as well. After that we kinda just talked and left. Home at last but I was tired so I went to sleep.
The next day I played roblox for the whole day. Same with the next day and the next day until the next weekend. In conclusion it was a boring holiday. It was so boring I was going to sleep. That’s basically it, that is my holiday. 

A couple weeks ago me and my family went to the air show in wanaka. There was a lot of planes like the f-16 , spitfire, hercules, biplanes and lots more. There were so much people there that you looked at the hill there was a massive line of people from one side of the hill to the other. So much
people were there that the lines for food was lots of people. but… it was boring.