we have been learning to make descriptive writing. how was your holiday

we have been learning to make descriptive writing. how was your holiday

A couple weeks ago me and my family went to the air show in wanaka. There was a lot of planes like the f-16 , spitfire, hercules, biplanes and lots more. There were so much people there that you looked at the hill there was a massive line of people from one side of the hill to the other. So much
people were there that the lines for food was lots of people. but… it was boring.